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Monday, December 31, 2018

Activity 3: Picture Perfect/ Summer Learning Journey week 2 day 4

On your blog, write a short story about what you think is happening in the picture. Be sure to tell us where you think the people are and what you think they were doing at the time that they stopped to pose for the selfie. To earn full points, the story must be 8 – 10 sentences long.
Hi Bloggers,In this post i will be completing the text above.


In this photo it looks like a man with all of his friends taking a photo,It looks like they are all in front of a mirror taking this photo.I think that they were all having a party but then decided what couldn't be better that taking a group photo.I could be very wrong but this is just a guess

Thanks for reading what I think is going on in this photo,Blog you later,Bye!

2 comments:

  1. Mauri Araura,

    I think your story is beginning to match the picture pretty well, ka pai. We can see that they are in a crowd of people (like a party) and they do look like they are happy to see each other, like friends and I guess I can see how you could think they are in front of a mirror. Good observing!

    A friendly reminder; remember that the task is asking you to write a short story about what is happening in the picture. You have made a good start, however you need to make sure it is between 8-10 sentences long. Please edit your post to make sure your story is the right length. I will be happy to award you full points for this activity once you have done this. :)

    I feel like the man they are taking a selfie with is some sort of athlete... What do you think? Use your thoughts to help you write the rest of your story.

    Last Christmas I took a selfie with my whole family before we went in on the Christmas feast. It’s one of my favourite selfies of 2018 because almost all of us are in the same picture, which is hard to achieve especially when everyone is so busy! :)

    I look forward to reading your edited post.

    Toe feiloa'i fo'i,

    Cia.

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  2. Hi Araura,
    Well done on finishing this activity. I agree with you, it looks like a man taking a selfie with his friends/family members. Where do you think they are taking the selfie? I think that they are at a sports venue or a sports stadium. Keep up the good work.

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