Hey Guys today i will be completing the text above..hope yo enjoy,Blog you later ,Bye
When the ran stopped I had open the door.It looked like the ran stopped so when I opened the door I took one step out and into the acid water then BOOM the acid from the water made a hole in my shoe. I was shocked! A few minutes later my family decided to go for a walk my family had know idea the rain was polluted but I tryed to warn them. "AHHHH" Yelled my brother.My family could tell something was unusual....
I hope you enjoyed reading my shore story...Blog you later,Bye!
Fakalofa lahi atu Araura,
ReplyDeleteIt would be so nerve wracking to open the door after acid rain, imagine the damage to your garden and surrounding trees. I liked the part where the acid burned a hole in your shoe that was highly dramatic! Fun fact, acid rain wouldn't actually be strong enough to burn a hole in your shoe, but for the sake of the story let's leave it in.
A friendly reminder; the activity asks that you write a story that is between 8-10 sentences long. Please add on to your story to make at least 8 sentences. You will be rewarded full points once you have done this before the Summer Learning Journey ends this week on Friday. :)
Toe feilo'ai fo'i,
Cia.
Hi Araura,
ReplyDeleteWell done on finishing this Summer Learning Journey activity. Your short story about the acid rain is great. Hopefully, something like that wouldn't happen in real life as we would all be doomed. First the acid would melt through the roof of your house and then you would have no where to hide. Anyway, keep up the good work.